------------------ psychlotron.org.uk ------------------ Name of resource: Psychology as a science improve the essay activity Author(s): Aidan Sammons Specification: AQA-B Details: A synoptic essay with lots of problems centred on (1) use of technical terms and (2) elaboration in discussion. Students can read, identify problems and suggest improvements. Works well if you encourage them to identify the problems they have in their own writing and use thatese as a starting point.